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Once upon a time, there was a young boy named Daniel. He is only 13 years old, but he loves to study and uncover myths. Daniel is one of the smartest teenage boys in the world. Daniel, one of the smartest teenagers in the world, is currently trying to discover the myth about aliens. Daniel is only a 13 year old boy, but he has published many books and has uncovered many of the myths known to mankind. However, Daniel has not yet debunked the myth about aliens, which leaves him to aim for one goal. Daniel spends over 10 hours every day trying to find out as much as he can about aliens. Due to Daniel’s superb intelligence, Daniel has skipped a few grades as he is currently in the 12th grade. Daniel is currently being tracked down by several assassin groups. Daniel must work with the risk of death since very little is known about them. Currently, Daniel thinks that he is 50% progressed on the myth of aliens. 96 days have passed and Daniel is still attempting to reveal the myth. Daniel thinks that he is approximately 96% complete with his mission. But in the lands of Piyocity, a terrible outbreak has began. The civilization in the city has mostly turned into zombies. The only option Daniel has, is to escape.

Daniel and his bodyguards gather their supplies and head out of the city. With the assassins still alive, Daniel is at huge risk. 24 days after the outbreak, they manage to settle in a abandoned house 300 kilometres away from the main city. The assassins are still following Daniel. Currently, Daniel is 99% complete with his research. Dawn strikes and the assassins show up and lurk around his house. 12AM and his goal is almost complete, but the problem is here. The assassins come with their truck loaded with zombies and unleashes the horrifying wave. The zombies bang on the doors of the house, leaving Daniel helpless. There is no escape. Daniel is still 99% complete and he is unable to finish. The doors collapse and the zombies break into his house as they feast everyone alive. In all of a sudden, Daniel wakes up realizing it was all a dream. But the problem is, he is in the scenario where he is studying the alien myth again.

The reason why I chose to make this story into a creative piece is because of the class I took last year, Creative Writing. In the previous years of Creative Writing, we worked with short story. Zombie type short stories are my favorite. So I decided to include zombies into this story. Myths about Aliens are also interesting so I put my focus onto the alien aspect of the myths. Overall, it is not that formal because I chose the creative piece and I feel like this has become more of a interesting story rather then a formal serious type of story.

PEER REVIEW

Very specific and intense
No confusion, straightforward and concise
No spelling errors

Repetition of words like “currently” or “study”
Some capitalisation errors
Should use more advanced language/better word choice

----Marvin